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Susan Lawson
To Write Is To
Date: Oct 13, 2009 5:10:52 PM PDT
Author: Susan Lawson

E-lab-o-rate.
Ma-nip-u-late.
Choc-o-late.
Language is power--
gorgeous
luscious
delirious.
A mad moment
fingered.
An urge cooked.
A lust lathered.
A moan read.
It's white hot and then
a raw boil of bitter rust.
Frantic pink & blood black & easy red
and after always ever
some think
some one
said.
Susan Lawson
 

 

Rebecca
 
Date: Oct 19, 2009 4:43:23 PM PDT
Author: Rebecca

Wonderful rapid fire word play in this one! Chocolate was a fun addition - unexpected, and it made me smile. The poem captures the passion and fun and (occasional) frenzy of writing. Great job!
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